hello game 1930456
the pictures are showing slowly so pls dont rush that game....to see all....
i will try other engine in my next game
the pictures are showing slowly so pls dont rush that game....to see all....
i will try other engine in my next game
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Hii, I was wondering if the game was meant to end after eating all the food and drinks (i tried to replay it and it end up the same). I like your art style UwU
edit: I noticed a few grammatical errors, i can tell u where are if u need help 👍
hello!! yes it ends there! its my first game so i just wanted to try and made it short....thank you so much!!
aaaa yes my english is cooked if thats not too big deal for you pls write where are the mistakes! thanks!
Some mistakes I found are: "Chawl out" i think should be "Crawl out". When she offers you the drink I think would be better to add "it" to "hope you liked". It's "ingredients" and not "ingridients". It's "don't want to try it" or "refuse to eat it/drink it". Last thing , when u want to "it is" or "i am" etc.. the correct contracted forms are "it's" and "I'm" etc..
I don't think if i found them all, try using https://context.reverso.net/ , it gives u the correct way to say something based on the context, it helped me so many times.
I hope i helped u UwU
thank you!!
No problem UwU if you need more help with something, let me know. Have fun creating UwU